Topic: Make mine doodles (Read 68298 times)

Disposable Ninja · « **Reply #300 on:** May 31, 2010, 09:47:16 PM »

Velma the Ghostbuster. Neat.

Friendly critique time: her stance is weak, man. She doesn't appear to be standing on anything, she really should have both feet firmly planted on the same plain. Other than that, you have some wonky anatomy and proportions (legs too thick, hand too big, etc,). There's also a lot that's pretty great about that picture, though, like the ammo links and the boots.

Stush · « **Reply #301 on:** May 31, 2010, 09:55:10 PM »

Yeah, I always thought the stance was a bit bad, but that's always been a problem for me, Those boots took ages to do, but i might have to redo one, I just wish I knew how I could fix it, if anyone could help me out with redlines or something, that'd be great.
I still think the legs are fine, she's a big girl! But yeah, the hands are a little bit, looking into ways to try and fix that without having to move a quarter of the picture.

Stush · « **Reply #302 on:** May 31, 2010, 09:57:36 PM »

And yeah, the boots are the main reason I don't wanna change the foot, those things came out awesomely.

(And contributed to like an hour of inking time)

Büge · « **Reply #303 on:** June 01, 2010, 05:17:31 AM »

That's why you gotta make sure your anatomy and proportions are right before you add doodads.

Stush · « **Reply #304 on:** June 01, 2010, 06:18:13 AM »

Quote from: Büge on June 01, 2010, 05:17:31 AM

That's why you gotta make sure your anatomy and proportions are right before you add doodads.

I knowww, but doodads are fun.

Stush · « **Reply #305 on:** June 01, 2010, 06:19:12 AM »

I've been working on this for like 6 hours today, and It is killing me, I seriously need to take a bit of a break, drawing shouldn't be this tiring.

Frocto · « **Reply #306 on:** June 01, 2010, 06:24:45 AM »

it is worth it for a gun that brings such excessive quantities of christmas cheer

Stush · « **Reply #307 on:** June 01, 2010, 08:59:36 AM »

http://stushcinta.deviantart.com/art/Jacinta-Versus-the-Gunship-166078122

I could still work on it a heap, but this is it for now, I'll just move onto the next drawing, I need to practice more, though. I think I could nearly be ready to start work on my comic soon! I just need to keep practicing!

McDohl · « **Reply #308 on:** June 01, 2010, 01:39:18 PM »

I'm sorry, but whenever I see Ghostbuster Velma, I can't help but think

NOW IS COWARD KILLING TIME!!

All humor aside, Stush, you the dude, manbro.

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Mongrel · « **Reply #309 on:** June 02, 2010, 10:52:26 AM »

One suggestion for future pictures is that if you're going to include a background, it'll really help the final look of the image by working on the two elements more simultaneously. That way both parts can enhance each other and will fit together better.

Joxam · « **Reply #310 on:** June 02, 2010, 04:09:03 PM »

Just got the drawing thing. Drew some eyes. Am drawing more stuff. Will probably be uploading a lot of useless shit as I work out how to use stuff in paint tool SAI.

Joxam · « **Reply #311 on:** June 02, 2010, 04:54:10 PM »

I drew an alien also.

Mothra · « **Reply #312 on:** June 02, 2010, 05:59:08 PM »

aww yehh

Joxam · « **Reply #313 on:** June 02, 2010, 08:10:58 PM »

Possibly I should change his shirt to say, 'Universe, I am disappoint"

Joxam · « **Reply #314 on:** June 03, 2010, 12:33:32 AM »

I drew another alien. Sorry if this is a lot of bullshit that sucks in one day, I'm just trying to keep up working AND feel out this new device. Once I get the hang of it I don't think I'll be posting every little thing I draw. Maybe. :D

Royal☭ · « **Reply #315 on:** June 03, 2010, 07:06:26 AM »

HEY

Post everything you draw. If you want critiques, we can help. If anything, it'll encourage you to be more artful and give us things to look at. Plus we'll be able to look over and see an arc of improvement over time.

Disposable Ninja · « **Reply #316 on:** June 12, 2010, 10:23:37 PM »

I think I'm going to limit myself to drawing a single miserable stick figure comic per day. In the meantime, here's a couple drawings I've been working on since I got my new tablet:

First, some unfinished I Wanna Be The Guy fanart

That's going to be Mike Tyson in the background.

Second, a naked girl. Who is Green (-ish Blue, the more I look at it. She's supposed to be more of a Blueish Green). And has no nipples. Or a belly button. Or hands, or legs.

She's from this huge, dorky fantasy thing I've been working on since forever. I'm still trying to figure out what she's going to wear. Well, wait, that's not quite right. I know what she's going to wear -- not much. I just haven't figured out the exact pattern.

R^2 · « **Reply #317 on:** June 17, 2010, 09:50:59 PM »

When I showed a friend of mine the Pidgeotto comic I put up on the HARD MODE thread, he told me he's a sucker for the "awesome face". That he'd love to see, like, an Awesome Beholder. And well, I already had MSPaint open.

EvaKisu · « **Reply #318 on:** June 21, 2010, 04:17:37 PM »

Here's a little something I've been working on. They are two characters from a comic I'm putting together.

Soon to be colored.

Stush · « **Reply #319 on:** June 22, 2010, 03:39:04 AM »

Just a quick [2 hours, which isn't really quick, I guess] Sketch I did before going to bed tonight.
I have a lot of trouble drawing pictures with multiple people, usually, but I think this one came out alright. There's a lot of little problems, mostly involving feet and legs, of course, but hopefully I can fix those up when/if I ink this thing.
Critiques/Comments/Suggestions/Redlines are all 100% welcome, I'd love them, in fact! Especially if you can tell me what i'm doing wrong and what i'm doing right.
[Re-uploaded because I edited some stuff]

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